Missing

I miss some people.....

I miss you, 

I miss the way you smile,

I miss every minute being with you,

I miss you.

I need you,

I need your love,

I need your warmth,

I need you.

I want you,

I want you in my arms,

I want you back in my life,

I want you.

I miss you,

I need you,

I want you.

Author's Note

lol i suck at poems

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

No you don/t. Simply expressing yourself is what makes the reader feel the poem and if they don't feel it.. Maybe they don't live in a poet's heart... You certainly are the heart of a poet speaking precisely what you want, need, miss...

[alexlessah]

You dont suck at poems, this is soo sad but so sweet.

[Wolfwind]

I think this works just fine. It's strong and to the point and shows clarity of need in it's words. Being able to express emotion is one of the most important aspects of poetry and you've done that wonderfully here. :)

Aaron

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

you dont suck at poems... i like it, very sweet and extremely cute...