dreams abridged ~

My dreams

enamoured by your stalking beauty

the plumed silhouette of which i see

disassembled by the myriad expressions

carved out in the willow of a tree.

The lucid fragments of those dreams

now find the chinks in the armour

of your extrinsic conscience

and theorize the choreography

of my life, held in solitude

for without your love

it can no longer be ...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams can lead us to the promise land or nightmares. I enjoyed how you described the dreams and the thoughts in this poem.
"The lucid fragments of those dreams
now find the chinks in the armour
of your extrinsic conscience"
No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote