. She .

this poem was written long time back for my soulmate who was yet to come into my life ..

Why am i alone ,why am i depressed
Guess its for my feelings that i have always suppressed.

Only if i could get a vent
Only if a few moments of bliss i could spent.

At times I wonder if i am to stay alone forever
If its to my fate that i should surrender.

But my inner soul speaks out
Hope's still there , all's not lost.

Its a wait .. though a long one
For someone special , someone chaste
That's undoubtedly gonna be my soulmate

I am sure of a change of fate.
Look out everyone
There SHE comes through the Heavenly gates !

Reviews

[clauds294]

Wow this was an amazing poem! I loved this one so much! You made the flow and the feelings become one and intertwined it all beautifully. You are a wonderful poet. Please continue because the talent is just seeping through the words you speak. Wonderful.

[Iota]

One of the things I really like about your writing style is your ability to have your poems rhyme with it sounding corny. This is a talent I lack in a major way. I can see you a man who understands love from within which is rare in men, but a gift for a poet to posses. All your work that I read so far is excellent and you seem to put your heart out there.

how u are able to write these poems with such flow of emotions
pta nahi
carry on the work

[Tate Morgan]

very well put

[JENY]

You really love her…..
Miss her….
I wish…I were she…..

[emmajoy]

The beginning of your poem was full of sadness and sad doubt .. so beautifully expressed but, then those last three lines so different, so full of hope - maybe ones to remember, to store away knowing that's how it can be.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Good that the magnetic one appeared...Great presentation of the idea..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sunflower

[Prateeksha Khot]

I loved the last stanza the most!

[indu]

for a change of fate, we look forward, we dream and hope. Yet hardly it comes. for you 'she' is hardly here. I hope you would find her soon ..(or may be you have since you say that the poem written long time back.) =)
loved it..

[Albatross]

Loved the second half to this especially.. The first couple of stanza's seem a little bit choppy.. I got lost at "Only if a few moments of bliss i could spent..." Maybe "could have spent"..
Otherwise, I love this, the idea that someone BECOMES a soulmate, there is no set person who just IS your soulmate. Beautifully done:)