Memories

words can't describe the emptiness that i feel inside without You 'my deity'

Just a moment ago ..
my mind went to where my heart is
looking at your photo i thought
the Almighty is surely a fine artist.

All the memories of yours
which used to be my lifeline
came back to remind me
of the gone by time.

When my days started with your thoughts
and nights ended with your giggles
when you used to worry about
even the smallest of my niggles.

When to have a glance at you
i would easily risk my all
when i could defy destiny
on just your one call .

I still feel the pang
as i take a walk down the memory lane
my heart will retain you as its deity
even if they term me insane.

Reviews

[clauds294]

Wow I loved this poem so much!
"looking at your photo i thought
the Almighty is surely a fine artist."

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Sensitive and honest!!!

[JENY]

Nobody will term you as insane…..
Because…..almost everybody will have gone through a similar pain…
in their life...
Of a lost love….

[Prateeksha Khot]

indeed a beautiful read

[deeps]

This is wonderful, i like this

[SamBug]

This was pretty good.

[Dupree]

This is good. Not your best but still very impressive

[Ashley.M.E]

This is really good