Hymn to the Sea

if i ever decide to pull my own plug then the Sea it'll be ..

                    A hymn to the Sea
                    I wanna get lost in thee.
                     so please let me in
                    for the eternal peace that lies therein...

Author's Note

'wanna' is informally used for want to . used it cause it felt right to me . so kindly overlook it

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

The sea is a beautiful living thing. This is beautifully stated but it is hinting with a somber tone.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was well written. Short, but nice. I love swimming in the ocean, but I don't think I would ever be able to live in it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a bittersweet longing here.. a desire to melt into the peace and beauty of the waves. The emotions here are rich and profound.

[dovetailer]

There is a serenity in the sea...watching it move and sway...a reflection of the sky above...maybe because we all came from the sea, there is a call to us to return...
Very nice sentiments...I've had them myself in a self-searching moment...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful yet solemn little gem~ there is such enormous beauty and treasures in her depths and yet also a wicked power~ for me it would be the deep deep woods~ =)~

[RJ620Win]

short but it amazes me,,,

[Cynthia]

That's beautiful!
Short but great work!

[Adelia Alighieri]

I think 'want to' would have worked better than 'wanna' in there.
Great picture, great poem.