Veneration

just a request that i often make to my angel , my deity in my dreams ...

even if eons pass by, my love shall remain true
thou art my totem, treasured only by a blessed few
they say that a woman's heart is a deep ocean
so let it be a haven for my piety and devotion...

Reviews

[dovetailer]

The love between a man and woman is probably the closest thing we will ever experience that gives us an inclination of how God loves us...
I marvel how you hold on to what you had...although she had moved on, you don't let go...she must be been quite special...even now

[clauds294]

This is another amazing write! You're on a role here! :) Keep it up

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

ethereal spiritual fluidity in gorgeous form~ a pure embrace of every facet of being~

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the spiritual essense of this is a delight to read..it is just enough..

[sarah]

this is really good nicely written!

[Dinesh Sairam]

I agree with Tate. By far, your best poem. And once again, all I request is prosodic accordance. :)

Keep writing.

[Tate Morgan]

the words intertwine and sing together its my kind of write i love it and i wont jerk your chain it is really good

[Tate Morgan]

by far your best so far and the best i have read in some time
bravo

[Cynthia]

Beautiful!!!!!

[Workingonit!!]

What a beautiful tribute to the angel of your dreams.. a timeless purity woven in a short but powerful stanza. Loved it.. the image is also very complimentary to the write.

[Poetic Beauty]

In a few short lines you have summed up eternal love and passion.