Faith

Hope is a good thing and all i pray to the Almighty is to never bereave of me of it ..

I am yours with my whole
be it my aging body or my immortal soul
someday the love in your heart will brightly glow
so 'tis a request my lady to never let go..

Reviews

[Marianne]

Unconditional and immortal love we all yearn for ~ and it is ours through faith by grace alone.

I love your request to be loved forever...a plea I relate to with all my heart...beautifully expressed !!

"Hope is an anchor for our soul, steadfast and secure".

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely romantic sweet~ beautifully fleshed out~ delicious to the touch of heart~

[sarah]

this is sooooooooo sweet! and romantic!

[emmajoy]

Sincere emotions beautifully put .. maybe a little more meter would help but, sometimes it's best to let thoughts run naturally

[Dinesh Sairam]

Seems like you like writing those single stanzas. Only request from me would be metric corrections. This poem is beautiful as it is, but I can only imagine how beautiful more it would be, with a prosodic make-up :)

Keep writing.

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ahhh so romantic...and spiritual..

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ooooooooo love it!! Awesome job on this one...

[Tate Morgan]

I like this style for you