Visage

my mind creates a vivid image for me

it's thine sweet glowing visage that i see

why does it do so, thou may inquire

cause 'tis the only way to escape the mire..

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Looking back on found memories or just daydreaming can make an unpleasant moment easier. the mind can over come our fears and difficulties in many different ways. Great write.

[RJM]

escape into the mind where nowhere else lies but hope and love. Nice work! :D

[Bubo]

escape into memories.........and beauty of love.........you are such a wonderful romantic writer!

[dovetailer]

some loves just make life worth living...

[emmajoy]

Beautiful picture, beautiful words ..

think sweet and glowing to brighten the spirit.

[Lydia Blackwell]

ha! it is almost humorous- I like it! yes, I do this well. I block out the crappy things life throws at me and concentrate on the good things. well done.

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always..delightful..inspirational work

[An owl on the moon]

I can sense the depth and wonder of this one.. I feel the imagery come alive.. making the day shine brighter.. the feet dance lighter... Beautiful and lifting words to take us from that miry clay...

[Bethany]

This is gorgeous! Short and sweet. The wording is so beautiful, nice work!

[Cynthia]

what a nice poetry! It's a realastic poem.