Moment

 

when all the good times in my life I compare

there is one moment that stands out as rare.

'tis when you had stroked my cheeks with care

and staring into thine eyes, my heart i could bare...

Reviews

[MiidniightSoul]

That's such a romantic and lovely poem. I'm touched by its beauty. So tender and gentle. The woman must be a really lucky one. Wonderful poem.

[Ruth]

Blissful love :)
Tenderly wrenching :)
xx

[Lydia Blackwell]

awww... this is so sweet! I love it.

[Bubo]

so romantic as always.....with tenderness and a raw depth.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely and ever gentle~

[dovetailer]

Ah...we all treasure moments like these...

[Dinesh Sairam]

According to me, the poem is still incomplete. But no dots on these lines. Perhaps you could replace 'Stroked' with 'kissed' :)

Keep writing.

[emmajoy]

Such special words for a priceless moment in time. Beautiful

[Poetic Beauty]

this sums up how we can feel deep emotions of love and connection to another person in just a few short lines. Job well done with this.

[sarah]

sooooooooo beautiful and touching! great write