An antithesis to my alter ego ~

caught in the whirlwind of today's hectic life i fall back wondering ...

An antithesis to my alter ego ~

Dressed up as they want me to
Conforming to the code they set up
Spending my time as they deem fit
Running a race which they designed
The garb masquerades servility...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes your words are true.
"Running a race which they designed
The garb masquerades servility..."
All of us must play many parts in a life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sahar moonlight]

Very true words.
Yes i can relate to your poem.
IT was expressed in a great way

[Enigma]

Brilliant and succinct. So many can easily relate to this feeling.

[Liza]

Ahhhh i relate, superbly expressed...we find freedom on the page