Rescind..

was it really what i thought it was ?

stay back with me for a while

stay back with me to entwine 

even if it's just for a moment 

even if it's just in my mind.

 

let us relive those ol' scenes

if we can't replay, let’s just rewind

wait, was our past really so pretty

or was it just a figment of my mind ? 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"wait, was our past really so pretty
or was it just a figment of my mind ? "
The above is always a good question. Easy to forget the bad moments when the opportunity to revive the good one's. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lovely Lady]

YUMMY! I love this very much... great work.

[Tate Morgan]

beautiful poignant sublime YES YES YES!!!!!