Lonely

Oh lonely to the land I walk

Lonely heart,
Lonely love,
Lonely fun,

Lonely love whispers

Lonely kissing,

Yuan for lonely mate
Lonely loneliness...

Reviews

[Bound In Red]

Simple but wonderful. I love this piece.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Loneliness, something one can feel even in a crowded room. A hollow empty feeling, well done. Yearn for lonely mate.............

[Becky C Strukamp]

The emotion of loneliness brilliantly portrayed

[Anina]

Simple, yet satisfying.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

It's very respective of its own way. Loneliness is never truly way to manipulate but here, you capture it's varied locations and its own stress. In just few words, you morphed everyday complications of lost company into a deeper prospect. It is very, truly, small words with a hell of a poison. Wonderful ink.

[Sami Geiger]

This is... amazing!

[Corset]

i like how lonely is the juxtaposition to all the things one would not describe as lonely until the end, lonely in the end and we all search to the end of a loneliness.

This is beautiful in it's whole-ness :D
Thank you J.


E.L.

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love that first line, it really captures you and drags you into the poem. Can definitely feel the loneliness in this as well as read it. Great first poem, looking forward to more =)