February 15

A Poem by GuineaPig

tetractys poem- i wrote it for a prompt a while ago

hearts

broken

chocolates

eaten all up

forgotten like the lost love they came from

but for a rumble in the stomach that

just like the heart

calls for more

but it's

gone

© 2010 GuineaPig

Author's Note

i dont normally like poetry formats but i had to try this one

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Bee135

this is really cool. No one really thinks about February 15th, because it is inbetween valentines day and shrove tuesday... great poem really like it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wicahpi

Well I'm glad you gave it a shot!
Gave me a giggle and I enjoyed the read :)
Thank you for your entertaining (I thought) entry
into my Tetracty #2 contest!!

Good Luck

Posted 15 Years Ago

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I'm not the best at writing, but I like it, so I really really appreciate constructive criticism, because I'd like to get better at it. I like poetry a lot... I'm not experienced much... that's all more..