your life & you!!!!

A Poem by gunjan

Things may be wrong,

But finish it like a song,

People may be right,

But don't take them lite,

Your path may be correct,

But think before you select,

Situations may get dramatic,

But don't let it last to pathetic,

Your heart has chosen you to breath strong,

So live it fully & don't let it get wrong....!!!!

© 2016 gunjan

Author's Note

our life makes us stand,fall,joy,regrets and what not but its all about how you take it and make it....

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barleygirl

Your poem has a good message & is well-written, with an interesting structure where each two lines is designed to go together. My only drawback is rhyming. As with other poems of yours, sometimes you are stretching to get a rhyme. You change the meaning or the correct usage of words, just to get the rhyme. Rhyming should never be more important than saying your message with clarity. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your view but i really love to rhyme my words and when i write i just write with a flow s.. read more

9 Years Ago

I understand . . . I've been accused of stretching for a rhyme many times *smile*

An owl on the moon

You bring such a strength and musical flow to your thoughts. There is a very hopeful light that grows with each line, and you end with an absolute fire of energy for living. Excellent!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!!

TheMalady

That is true! Life is not always in our favor, especially with the downs that we have experienced. Your poem explains them all, how to stay strong and to be optimistic all the time. Thanks a lot for sharing your poem! I love how you rhyme your words. It's perfect and this will serve as my mantra during my dark days.

Thanks a lot for sharing this. Keep on writing! ;)