I BELIEVE IN YOU..!!!!

This is my love for completing 6 years,,,,(3/2) only for you my love....

 

 

YOU LOVE, YOU CARE,

MY PAIN YOU SHARE,

IF I’LL FALL YOU’LL BE THERE,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU….

 

YOU UNDERSTAND THE UNSPOKEN,

YOU JOINS THE BROKEN,

I KNOW YOU’LL FIND ME IF I’M LOST,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU…..

 

YOU WORK FOR US,

YOU LIVE FOR US,

YOU JUST NEVER THINK OF YOURS

ITS’S ALWAYS US,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU….

 

YOU ALWAYS MAKE MY DAY,

WALK WITH ME ON MY WAY,

YOU ALWAYS DO THE NEEDFUL

WHICH I NEVER HAVE TO SAY,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU…..

 

YOU ARE THE BEST,

EVER YOU BETTER SUGGEST,

I JUST THINK OF YOU IN TROUBLE

& FORGET THE REST,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU….

 

YOU MAKE MY LIFE BETTER,

WHAT PEOPLE THINK DOES’NT MATTER,

COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU,

I’LL ALWAYS BELIEVE IN YOU,

COZ YOU’RE THE ONLY ONE

WHO RULE MY HEART & MAKES ME BELIEVE IN YOU,

YOU’RE THE RAREST & AMONG THE FEW,

I LOVE YOU COZ I REALLY BELIEVE IN YOU..!!!!!

Author's Note

this is my love for some one,,,,,so please read this if you love & believe some one..

Reviews

[Amisha Gehlot]

Very nicely written sweetheart...he must be lucky to have you..

[barleygirl]

This is what every person is longing for: SOMEONE TO BELIEVE, UNWAVERINGLY. You've shown how this happens, using a delightful amount of specifics to paint each scenario. I don't like when you use "ALL CAPS" & BOLD!!! This makes it seem like you are shouting every part. Emphasis should be saved for using carefully. Your words are strong enuf. You don't need the extra text tricks to make your poem stand out. Thank you for an uplifting poem. We should all tell each other this more often.

[gunjan]

thank you for your opinion and surely from the next time i'll try to ignore more "CAPS & BOLD"
and thanks for giving your valuable time to read my poems..

[TheMalady]

This one is tender and full of love. I wonder if, aside from your special someone, this could be dedicated as well to our dear parents. I especially like the line:

YOU ALWAYS MAKE MY DAY,
WALK WITH ME ON MY WAY,
YOU ALWAYS DO THE NEEDFUL
WHICH I NEVER HAVE TO SAY,
COZ I BELIEVE IN YOU…..

Thanks a lot for sharing this poem. Awesome! :)

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully spoken! How your words give light to the soul of loving, and knowing how you see inside your precious one so deeply.

[gunjan]

thanks dear,,,,It's just my love for him which made my words so beautiful...

[Gaurav]

A simple yet profound feelings of love. Only some lucky ones get to meet such beautiful people. Good one. Liked it.

[gunjan]

thank you Gaurav...