Keep It Equal !

No need to LOVE me,

If you don’t TRUST me.

No need to CARE for me,

If you choose your WORK first.

No need to HUG me,

When you’re LOOKING at something else.

No need to TALK to me,

If you just wanna be SILENT.

No need to RESTRICT me,

When you’re ROAMING out.

No need to SHOUT at me,

When you’re proved WRONG.

No need to show me

That you are the MAN,

Because my HEART has chosen you

To be with ME…..

So keep it EQUAL Mr. MAN……

Author's Note

this is something what i feel like,
at present the girls can do anything but still somewhere they are not considered to be equal.

Reviews

[Sunita Jugran]

Perfectly said. Neat delivery. I like the no clutter way of your writing style.

[gunjan]

thank you so much for your kind words.....

[An owl on the moon]

Your form and flow are so distinct, so vivid and powerful. Your message melts so perfectly into the heart and soul of your words.

[Greg Agee]

Interesting but good flow and timing , kind of hard subject but everyone has their own reality, well expressed

[gunjan]

Thanks for your time and valuable words....
Thank you

[TheMalady]

I feel like your poem had pierced my heart, especially with the line:

No need to CARE for me,
If you choose your WORK first.

It's been a while since I've read your poem and you still hold that magic. All I can say is, keep up the good work. This poem can penetrate deep into man's heart, especially when Life demands so much from you that you neglected the most essential people and things around you. Great job! :)

[gunjan]

thanks TheMalady....this is real because a man just completes his responsibility and nothing else.read morethanks TheMalady....this is real because a man just completes his responsibility and nothing else.
they actually don't know what love and care means...
thanks for your words...