The Notebook

The Notebook

A Poem by Shalini R

Her ring shimmers in

The slivered light as she strokes

Another man’s hair.

 

© 2008 Shalini R


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Oh I love this movie "The Notebook"......the lead guy is my hero....becuz he got the girl back.....He was not rich or more handsome as the other guy but...he kept it real and showed her love......she realises that she has more fun with the original guy than with the Pretty Boy Soldier...great tribute to the movie..

Posted 18 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I really liked this one. So much said in so few words. I've never seen the Notebook so I can't compare, but I still say great write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great moment from the movie, and you wrote just so that even people who hadn't seen the movie would know what was going on in this moment. This poem exudes talent! Good luck again!
KH

Posted 18 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh I love this movie "The Notebook"......the lead guy is my hero....becuz he got the girl back.....He was not rich or more handsome as the other guy but...he kept it real and showed her love......she realises that she has more fun with the original guy than with the Pretty Boy Soldier...great tribute to the movie..

Posted 18 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on February 10, 2008

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Shalini R
Shalini R

black hole, MD



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The name's Shalini, I'm addicted to wrecklessness. DOT, not feathers. I'm kind of a strange colabaration of ridiciously fun-loving [sadly sometimes without weighing the cost] and an old soul. I am .. more..