New Quest

it was actually a real life story of the girl who has many unsolved problems...i wanted to give her at least a little hope from this story...

I sat beside the river then look at the water. I saw an image of a little chubby girl whose has a pair of cute eyes- very beautiful but deep inside, there goes the pain hiding for a long time that came from the past but written in the future. Behind her killer smile there goes, the sad stories that she wanted to burst out from deep inside. Behind those outrageous laugh, there goes the problems that leaning on her shoulders. Behind those craziness, there comes another problem after solving one. In this simple world full of different simple and complex problems, it can be easy enough to withstand anything but, faith sometimes play unfair, it will give you enough reason to give up, to slide down back to where you've started.  Its amazing how a little girl like me passed this kind of problems, how a little girl like me withstand the unfavorable condition of faith and still standing strong in the middle of a storm.
I then stand then walk away to that calm river of my life, I'm ready enough to withstand another problem, I wanted to stay but that would be a big sacrifice on my part, leaving my friends, family and real world. Right time is dotted on one hand of the clock so I still have to wait until it strikes the right time, for now, my boat that was anchored at the rough sea ready to sail again, ready to withstand any problem- ready to start a new journey.

Author's Note

It was my life....I hope you like it...I remembered what my friend said to me that's why I wrote it.. "be true on what you feel, let your feeling burst

Reviews

[goodbye noooooo]

thats sweet... touching...

[Aline S. Iniestra]

I ree with Poppy; there's a time for everything, and everything happens for a reason. All the things we go through have a purpose although we don't see that right away. Lovely writing! Very honest and heart open =)

[Andrew Wright]

Your feelings definitely achieved bursting levels... I caught them. This is a beautiful piece.

[Ruth]

Lovely sweety :) You have a good heart, its not always easy to let people know you are there, for them or yourself!
There are right times for everything in life, if not now, it wasn't meant to be yet!
xx