Chapter 17 "The Final Ticking"

Chapter 17 "The Final Ticking"

A Chapter by HaleyB

The impostor looked up just in time to see the door close.


Michael said nothing. No dramatic entrance. No flourish. No weapon.


He simply stood.


The impostor’s breath caught. For a moment, he wasn’t sure if the man before him was real-another phantom from the corner of a mirror, a figure he'd felt behind his spine like a metronome just slightly out of sync.


But this wasn’t a hallucination.


This was a reckoning.


"Who are you?" the impostor croaked. His throat was dry, cracking. He hadn't spoken in days. 


Hadn't needed to.


Michael didn't answer.


He stepped forward, eyes passing over the room: fast food wrappers collapsing in on themselves, a heap of torn sketches in the corner, the stolen journal - one of the boy's journals - swollen with sweat and failure.


Michael reached for it. Turned a page. Then another. His movements were slow, exact. His gaze didn't waver.


Only one line left his lips:

"You’ve never listened. Only repeated."


The impostor lunged - not with courage, but with the last spasm of a drowning thing.


Michael slipped aside, as if the air itself moved past him.


The impostor stumbled into the wall, clawed at the desk for balance.


Michael was already behind him. One gloved hand guided the imposter's head gently to the table. The other held the syringe.


A soft hiss. A controlled breath.


The impostor stilled. Muscles seized in slow collapse. His mouth worked without sound.


Michael knelt beside him.


"You killed the boy because he heard the rhythm before you," he said, voice almost kind. "You saw his silence and filled it with your noise."


The impostor’s pupils trembled, foam collecting at his lips.


"I’m not here to teach you," Michael continued. "That grace was never yours."


From his coat, he drew a small clock - brass and ironwork, immaculate. The second hand ticked with perfect precision.


He placed it before the imposter's eyes.


"You wanted the symbol. The sensation. You never cared for the balance."


The impostor twitched, lungs clawing for air.


Michael's hand rested lightly on his shoulder. He leaned close enough for the words to land where hearing fails and knowing begins.


"You aren’t a failed student," he whispered. "You were never invited to the lesson."


He rose. No kill shot. No flourish.


The journal - the boy's original - slid back into Michael's coat. At the door, he looked over his shoulder one final time.


"The Law of Precision isn’t about death. It’s about knowing what must be stopped so the rest can move."


The impostor released a final, uneven sound - somewhere between a sob and a tick.


Michael left before it finished.


-


Down the fire escape, the city hummed with evening.


Michael walked slowly, head bowed - not in shame, but reverence.


Above him, Room 207 held the final breath of a man who had tried to imitate time.


Only the Law knew how to end it.


Michael didn’t look back.


The wind shifted, and somewhere deep inside the gears of the world, a second hand paused-


-and began again.



© 2025 HaleyB


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