The Death Of The Sun

The sun is dying
the gay colors fade to black
but the color are still living among us
in our veins and hearts
especially in our minds
as it dies it leaves a new
the livelihood of the Luna crescent
and the sun comes back to life

 

Reviews

[Ashli The Amazing]

wow i really like it [: it's very good

[Krystal Nicole]

Im not a very good poet, but this is really good.Great choice of words. Awesome job! And God Bless

[Kelly M.]

I like it! Very imaginative, creative and beautiful! Great job as always. :)

*Kelly* (you know that. Lol.)