Try

Read and decide for yourself.

They keep pushing me,

pushing me without Pause.

i Attempt to keep up,

keep Up with the pace They set for me.

i want to be my Self,

my Self that no longer exsists.

they corroded my Self,

my Self was burned until the ashes are blown away.

i cannot exist,

Exist in this state of Nothingness.

there is nothing here for me,

for me to be.

my attempt failed,

failed like the Failure i am called.

i was Pushed,

pushed till i Broke.

 

Author's Note

I would like to know your opinion, good or bad, please.

Reviews

[shane]

good, very good, i like it anyways!! :)