You.. the Beautifully Cruel you ..

about someone i loved so dearly, a friend, a companion who didn't care about how much she meant to me ..

beneath the stars

under the moonlight 

talking to each other 

for hours passing like seconds

we loved to be 

free from this world

in our own creation 

deep in our secret thoughts

you loved to hear

what i meant to say 

and i in turn did

smile on your innocent words

your realizations, were so precious

and my loads of thoughts endless

so much to say each day

and hear, if nothing, then your beautiful voice

and one day you forgot

i too had a heart

you walked away without a word

forever to, break me apart ... 

and i still do 

miss you a lot ..  

 

Reviews

[Kelsey]

"your realizations, were so precious
and my loads of thoughts endless"

This is so beautiful. I also love the line "and one day you forgot I too had a heart." It really expresses the pain of loss and how dearly you miss the person and what you once had. Wonderfully done.

[Hamza]

oh thank you Kelsey :)
and yes you got tit right , the lines you mentioned are the heart to this piece ... :)

[KarinaT]

oooh ouch! he cruelty of ignorance of someone's feelings - or perhaps indifference. Very well put Hamza

[Hamza]

Thank you and I guess indifference would fit in better ... :)
thank you very much !!

[Zammy]

the heart of all this is this line
*and one day you forgot
i too had a heart*
brilliant poetry !!

[Hamza]

Thank you so much for those words :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Such a sweet poem! I really enjoyed the first stanza!

[Hamza]

thanks a lot :)