Life Phases...

when you make someone face something and then quote about it as if it has happened to you .. i'm amazed ..

There was a time when life was just life...

There were moments we wanted to stop forever...

There were days we cherish and long for....

Life was a pretty big bowl of roses to pick from...

Life was a basket of joy and emotions to choose from...

Every second that we spent, was a second so beautiful..

Every moment that passed along smiled along upon us...

Priorities remained little, everything was spontaneous ...

We lived life in a bliss of the spot thoughts...

But nothing remains forever in our hand...

Its like sand slipping continuously through...

We were alone , and will always be...

Rest is just an illusion, a method set by Him...

To remember and cherish all the good times ...

In the times when nothing goes good...

Until,

Life again becomes life...

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

Very nice imagery and metaphor, especially in the "Life was a pretty big bowl of roses..." line. I liked it ;P Although, and sorry for criticizing, I feel like the "sand slipping away" metaphor is a little bit cliche. But to each his own. Overall, I really liked it :D Great job!!!

[Hamza]

oh yes you're right but it was flowing and i couldn't resist penning it down ...
thank you for your kind words though :)

[Willam Brunge]

this is too good.
Life
Joy
Emotions
Sadness
Life
how clearly has the life cycle been described. i sense a sweet emotion behind this write. good work !

[hogan]

Something very deep in these thoughts, I like intensely....

[Jo March]

Beautiful, as always. Love reading your work

[Hamza]

thank you :)

[The Refined Poet]

I really liked this piece. It takes you on a mini journey. Ends on a note of hope... I liked that...

[Hamza]

thank you :)

[Kelsey]

Very nice piece, really makes you think about the changes we're faced with in life, and how differently we all handle them. Lovely job. x

[Hamza]

thank you so much kelsey .. :)

[Castonovia]

Yes time does indeed seem to slip through our hands, but what we have left is meant to be cherished and lived to the fullest despite what troubles may arise... thought provoking, life is life. Love the sad note at first then ending on a happy, little tune. True piece through and through ;)

[Hamza]

you understood it pretty well ...
thanks a lot ...

[Castonovia]

No problem :p

[Zammy]

*Life again becomes life*
sweet, and this prove s you are very talented

[Hamza]

thank you zammy .. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Morning Hamza, this is a very well constructed piece that simply flows from the page. It has a real melancholy feel to it despite the hopeful ending. The opening stanza is gripping.

[Hamza]

thank you so much John ... :)

[beautiful dreamer]

your welcome

[dunnia]

Wow this is really good i love it so much im going to shelf it

[Hamza]

haha
thank you very much !!