Wish...

from the deepest corner of my heart..

wish death could solve all problems ..

wish everything finished in one  go ... 

life seems so tiring sometimes .. 

wonder how death would taste like .. 

they say it's just a touch and a go .. 

but would it hurt to leave the worries behind .. 

after all, we do love worries .. 

we cannot live without them ... 

a happy life is a myth ... 

a happy death .. unknown ...

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Death is considered beautiful by poets and artists. To us, the idea of mystery fuses itself with beauty. Often we have all wondered about death. Some of us fantasize about it. A few of those dare to write it down. But only very few have tried putting their words to actions, and the ones who have, have joined the world of the unknown. I have this theory, that true beauty was meant to be a secret. Only a chosen few can experience it. Once they do, they don't have words to express themselves-and in the case of death, there is no choice! So I really like your thoughts on this. I love this sort of poetry :)

[Hamza]

i feel death has been portrayed wrongly as the last salvation from the worries of our life, i thought putting it in a contrast ..
though i gave a lot of priorities to the pain and loss, death somehow turns out to be inevitably the last resort ... people just can't get over with it ..
thank you so much .. :)

[Blue Ivory]

That's actually a pretty interesting thought!

[Salar Majak]

a great peice, chilling. i love it

[Hamza]

thank you .. :)

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[Hamza]

thank you .. :)

[Lover Of Words]

Oh wow what an amazing peice!

[Hamza]

thank you .. :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure :)