Who am I?

Poem

Who am I?

I don't know
Who am I?
Everyone says something else,
cute, sweet, funny,
Stupid, shy, dumb

 

Who am I?
Do I need to be myself?
Who is right?
I don't know

Where do I belong?

Am I good or bad?
Nobody tells me
Nobody knows me
I don't know why

 

Who am I?

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very hard question. I believe you need to roll with the flow. Do what you desire and see where you may end up. Other people opinion are useless. You must like the person you see looking back in the mirror. A very strong poem with a good question.
Coyote

[JZOZA]

Just be yourself man. Good piece.

[MOON]

Yes , who am I the eternal question is it me or merely a reflection . Beautiful verse.

[Jed Sabffle]

I can relate into this. People say so much things about us. Some are good but some are really bad. And their different impressions on you makes you feel confused of what and who you really are.
But we just have to do what we think is right. We cannot please everybody.
We should not live by the way other people want to,, And your life or your identity depends on you..

Sorry for the long review. :)).. I was just carried by this poem
Overall, this is very great!! Keep it up! :D

[annie minus]

This so reminds me of the feelings I used to get as a teeanager, feeling that nobody understood me, nor I myself and having a major identity crisis! Thankfully those times have gone - I could thoroughly relate to this. Annie :)

[a burnt omelette]

A lot of times, we are a bunch of characters. Each character wears a unique mask that reflects a different emotion or personality to blend into a situation or an environment. That's my two cents' worth.

[~ Moonlight ~]

You could maybe make it flow abit more, keep it flowing, its abit rusty so far!

[TheElfPrincess]

It turned out really interesting, I like how you repeated the: Who am I. It gives extra value and makes a reader understand it more. The feelings sound very realistic. I am curious to see what more things you will write and I hope you will continue writing things like this and stories.