CLOUDED

CLOUDED
Sometimes we tend to be imperceptible
with what and how we truly feel.
Just like the morning sun,
it may be clouded and invisible...
But one thing is certain,
it is right up there.

Reviews

[sheandherself]

I like to say that simplicity is power and you proved me right. Powerful statement, right here.

[Connie]

I love the simplicity in this, yet it says so much.

[Insight "MH"]

thought provoking.Well done.

Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[Insight "MH"]

You are very welcome. ^_^

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

lovely thought continued through to the point. nice!

[butterfly desire]

This is nicely written we all at one point or
another try to hide how we really feel
but forget those feelings will just keep building
and just like a storm cloud one day will bust

[hanir]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
😊

[butterfly desire]

Your welcome

[terry smith]

oh to be the sun and make our way through the haze to be seen by everyone...Nice poem!

[hanir]

Thank you. 😊

[....................]

sometimes we are clouded to ourselves and others but those feelings are still there, waiting for us to deal with them, or not... nice work, Hanir

[hanir]

I agree! 😊
Thanks for the review.

[....................]

you are welcome!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

A soft ethereal write....love the analogy with the sun. I adore going out on our porch each morning to watch the early dawn....something magical about it. Nicely inked!

[hanir]

Sun is shinin... always..
Thanks for the review. 😊

[JulianaSun]

Yep, ignoring the obvious when the obvious demands to be acknowledged and felt. Wouldn´t it be nice if our hearts were like the sky and we could just drapped some clouds over them when they are burdensome?
Wishful thinking! :)

[hanir]

...then my heart would be a constantly stormy sky!!!

[Tomoe Tellez]

Sometimes we just don't know how to express our feelings. If it's difficult for us as writers I guess it's harder for others. I liked it.

[hanir]

Thank you! 😊