STOLEN SHOT

STOLEN SHOT 

Things unfold right before your eyes. 

Sometimes abruptly. 

Unexpectedly. 

And there you are unprepared. 

Caught in an unforeseen situation wherein you wish to run away. 

You wish to hide. 

 But it's kinda too late already.

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

Hahaha, I can´t even remember how many times I wanted to run away and hide my head in the sand. I love the way you capture the essence of emotions and feelings. Your poems are like tiny bottles of wisdom ad truth and beauty. You read them and you see yourself reflected in other people, and understand that you are not the only one who views the world in a certain way.

[hanir]

Thank you! Your review is more accurately wonderful than my post! Lol 😅

[MadalaJose]

Beautiful poem, being taken unawares:down to earth.

[Avelina]

I liked this, and is definitely relatable

[hanir]

I appreciate it. Thank you. 😊

[wordman]

reminded me of a photographer looking for that perfect shot

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

I like the premise, but I think it is a bit too wordy and the concept gets lost as a result. I could send you a revised version if you would like. (Note: I do freelance editing in the real world :-)

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read and share your thoughts. I appreciate it..though Im a bit unsure about the concept youre referring to. 😊(Note: Writing is not my forte. Havn't been into what you do or anything like it in the past. So, dont be too hard on me. lol. 😆) Yes, please send me your revised version. Im open for your suggestions. 😊

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

I'll shoot for tomorrow evening. It's almost bedtime in my neck of the woods :-)

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

Also, keep writing, writing, and writing some more! Like anything it takes practice and you actually write pretty well. Just some tweaks here and there ;-)

[hanir]

Ok.Take your time. Il be waiting. 😊

[SIAN]

Too true are your words 'Caught in an unforeseen situation' and your last sentence kinda gives a little hug. Almost like to say its alright to move on.

[hanir]

Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts. 😊

[Lena M. P.]

Writers and photographs walk through life looking at the small picture to see the big picture. Too many walk passed and miss the beauty right in front of them. Enjoyed reading this.

[hanir]

So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my piece. 😊

[Ruth]

Life has a way of doing that, so does the heart...your writing holds a philosophical quality that I really enjoy :)

[hanir]

Thank you for reviewing. 😊

[Lydia Shutter]

You have described a feeling so many will relate to here, Hanir. We realize too late we are in a situation we should never have gotten into. I liked this. Lydi**

[hanir]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate.it.

[Perkele.7885]

So, you make the best of a bad situation. You bluff, you become a bit obnoxious and play an A in the hole. Take your best shot as, I am on my way out and you leave like a bullet.

[binibiningmaya]

Great job Ms. Hanir ^________^

[hanir]

Seriously??! 😁
Thanks for the review.

[binibiningmaya]

Seriously :)