MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE

"MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE"

She's been floating in the sea of mystery.

Trying to find answers to the most enigmatic questions.

Finding meaning to some meaningless situations.

And trying to seek for an affirmative message..

When apparently, there is none.

Reviews

[Autumn Lyric]

a brief message that speaks volumes...Thank you for sharing!

[Amy R]

beautifully written!
one of my favs!
thanks for sharing...
~Amy :)

[alifeacoustic]

Very nicely done in so few words. Lost in a sea of questions, with few answers. Thank you for sharing.

[Insight "MH"]

Wonderfully written. In some cultures, a woman refers to a bottle, being fragile and transparent.

Thank you for sharing this fine piece of work.

Insight.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Brilliance needs only a few lines to impress upon its reader. I think this is awesome!

[lightflower14]

wow!that was really short and i love the way you analysed it.

[butterfly desire]

This is amazing I love how you envoke such
big ideas into so few words you are truly talented

[hanir]

Thank you for giving such a nice review.
😊

[butterfly desire]

Your welcome .

[FaeryQueen]

i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hanir]

Thank you. 😊

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

This poem is universal in that it will resonate with anyone at an existential crossroad. A very deep message within simple prose. My only advice would be to lose the comma in the last line as it throws off the rhythm, that or place the text after said comma in its own sentence which would accomplish the same effect as the comma but without disrupting the rhythm of the piece.

[hanir]

Point noted. Thank you for taking time to read and give a constructive review on my write. I would be pleased if you could review some more of my writings. Since this is not my forte it would be of great help.

[Red3Bravo]

I like that! No message is a message of sorts. What a cool poem.

[hanir]

Thank you. 😊