MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE

"MESSAGE IN AN EMPTY BOTTLE"

She's been floating in the sea of mystery.

Trying to find answers to the most enigmatic questions.

Finding meaning to some meaningless situations.

And trying to seek for an affirmative message..

When apparently, there is none.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

Beautifully chosen imagery and words! Thank you for the insightful poem!

[Cherry Pepperweb]

We don't always know where we'll land and why.
I like this one.

[closed]

an empty message in that great existential sea...


searching for answers with a pen...


thanks for sharing this message in a bottle

[Coyote Poetry]

Okay. I wanted to know more. Nice use of words. Left reader with question and mystery. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tomoe Tellez]

I liked this, many people set out into the unknown looking for something that doesn't exist.

[terry smith]

when the message comes to you the emptiness disappears.

[hanir]

Been waiting for that day..
thanks for the review.

[terry smith]

The message is the strength within you,and when someone sees that strength and sees it as beauty then you have your reply.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Written with creativity and imagination! Now I can clearly see bottles floating in the ocean that are somehow sentient...and the last line does leave one thinking....nicely done!

[hanir]

Thank you for the review.

[....................]

this message rings loud and clear: the answer she seeks isn't here...

[hanir]

Yes, the answer exists but its just not the answer shes looking for. Not the affirmative message shes been waiting for.

[E G TEN]

Nicely done, and witty. We often assume that something is wrong
just to justify our action where in this case, nothing at all. But at
least she gets to go on a Cruise Ship.:-) Cool poem.

[hanir]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my piece! 😊

[JulianaSun]

haha, this one made me smile. I can even see you smirking sarcastically while writing that last line. She floated and floated and floated...and then, realized all the effort had been in vain. So brilliant! :)

[hanir]

Exactly! 😊