THAT SONG FOR NO ONE

I came up with this pointless prose after listening to a song about lament of a lost love.

THAT SONG FOR NO ONE

As I was going through every line,

You were the only person I had in mind.

Every word in this song of lament,

says perfectly what my heart speaks at this moment.

But since you're obviously gone..

Well I guess I'll just gonna partake this song for no one.

Reviews

[Jenna Kay]

You captured my exact feelings beautifully!! Sometimes our everyday thoughts are pointless, but make us feel the greatest emotions. Nice work!!

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read. 😊

[wordman]

thanks for saying so..

[Jenna Kay]

No problem!

[wordman]

and a beautiful song for no one was great !

[hanir]

Thanks for the review. 😊

[terry smith]

....bedsitter people look back and lament,another day's useless energy spent...moody blues...beautiful poem!! write what you feel till you don't feel it anymore.sometimes numbness and walls other times brashness and balls.

[hanir]

Then I guess i'll be writing eternally since the pain seems to be eternal too.
Thanks for reviewing. 😊

[terry smith]

And I will keep reading...hoping for a day when things become a little less painful for you.

[hanir]

Thanks for your eternal support! 😊😁

[terry smith]

:) Always!!

[alifeacoustic]

Wonderfully captured and not at all pointless. That feeling of no longer sharing and knowing can be all consuming, but the echoes in your heart and mind keep reverberating what used to be.
Great ending.

[hanir]

Thank you for taking time to read.
I appreciate it deeply! 😊

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.