Nonchalant Waiting

Ungratefully declining,

Throught a hundred ways, 

Passing Over a thousand of opportunities

-Trying to Leave Pointless Passion Behind- 

The missing-links putting my mind at ease, 

Oppening a Ditche in me 

The hunch I've been here alreaydy 

Still feeling the drudging soul growing

Humanity is Smoldering

The cocoon, still could Hatch

Hitting, After years of wandering

In hazy gream, Miscarrying, 

Erring throught Dusty Gloom,

The odd Feeling to Smack a Hatching

Foreboding some Ending

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

This poem is really good in my opinion. Some words carry a deep meaning and it makes one think about the poem as a whole. Your poem is in broken-rhyme and that makes your poem feel awesome but I recommend to put in a description. For many who don't understand the core of your poem wants a general understanding of the core in the description. Make your description short and snappy. Don't make an whole essay in your description but tone it down to one or two sentences. Can you tell me the core of your poem. What do you want us to understand, for I am really interested in this poem. It reads so epic.

Good job :D