The N*****s of Death

written for a catchiest title contest

The baby was fed
The baby fell over dead
All mourn the baby.

Reviews

[Viki Rachel]

I like this!

[Abby G.]

haha. That was a great read! The poem certainly stands out. : )

[Luke Brooks]

Wow.
What a crazy way to go with a title.
Good luck. I like it.

[Steven Silvey]

I don't understand the last line. Why hail the baby? He died.
I might say something like "All mourn the baby."
I don't know.
As for the catchiest title, I'd say that you have it sealed with this one.
It's definitely an attractive title.
Good luck.

[Eric Schnell]

I think you should win the catchiest title! That intrigued me to read your poem. I was not sure what it was about when I read the title. Maybe some guy being obsessed with n*****s. Ha ha...overall, you did a great job writing this short poem!