Barriers

Breaking down a self made barrier.

 

Disliking the unnecessary destruction.

 

Rebuilding the brick walls.

 

Dealing with my constant self induction.

 

I know this living turntable never trips.

 

But it being a broken record, only makes it scarier.

Reviews

[Papaya]

and sometimes you hear the static and crackling in your head, of the record
i liked this

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked how you made the reader understand your thoughts in the poetry. Using the turntable and broken record to make the emotion felt. Self-made barrier are the hardest to brake down. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[z.chéri]

Touching!! Very well written.
Also i have a poetry competition that i would love for you to enter! It ends in a couple days so i hope to see a submission from you! Keep writing! :)

[HappySad]

Thank you for the compliment. I am interested in the competition. Please send me the name so I can check it out.

[z.chéri]

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/POETRY-%21/54629/

Here is a link :)

[sette]

i like the poem, it speaks out volumes towards us readers, me i can adopt a philosophical belief behind it and of course the existentialist's point of view. thanks for this piece of writing

[HappySad]

I am pleased that you liked it and I appreciate the review. Thanks!

[sette]

you are welcome