Can you

Valentine's day special

Come in my eyes, like rays of sun,
Entering a room, when it is dawn, to lit up,
New hopes and aspirations,
Come in my breaths, like the fragrance of spring,
And melt my breaths in your,
To cast a new love,
Come in my heartbeat,
Like someone is walking briskly for zenith,
And let's have a sleep on rainbows,
Come in my arms as if,
It is the last moment of life,
So that I put all the love in your lap,
That life has ever reserved for me .

Reviews

[Wandervogel]

this piece moved me.......loved it...

[~]

I absolutely love the idea of "casting" a new love. Only fate will decide what will these hopes and wishes will turn into. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

"walking briskly for zenith,
And let's have a sleep on rainbows,
Come in my arms as if,"

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Sreenath]

there is a inbuilt rhythm to this piece .. it flowed like water and felt like butter ... nice emotions , enjoyed reading it .... keep smiling peace :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much :)

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work! Very well thought and penned, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much friend

[justaishaaa]

this is so fresh and just natural!, I really love it!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

Beautifully penned, sir and sweetly conveyed...You do it naturally...:)...........

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much dear friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......................

[Norah]

I really love this, beautiful and vivid description.. Excellent!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Norah

[Sindu]

That is a beautiful work Hardeep.. A heartfelt description of love to read and experience..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you so much Sindu

[Avinash]

Longing for love beautifully reflected in your words Hardeep bhai. It was a pleasure reading it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thank you Avinash