Wing To You 2

love has no distance

I wish I was a bird, much like a swan of
such beauty, such elegance.

 

Then I would fly to you, thus the time
isn’t an issue of how near, or
how far. As long as the wind
will flow gently through my wings                   
take me to where you are.

 

By the sky’s last breath, which
embraces its hands upon my wings,
through every crevice and every seam,
and yet it would seem that my
wings aren’t tired by far.
As long as they will carry me
to where you are.

 

I would sore through the whole sky as
far as my eyes could see. As long as
my heart yearns deeply to be with thee.

 

I would glide over the highest peaks
of this land, and over the deepest
bodies of water, asking my wings to
carry me to where you are, no matter
how far, far, far.

 

I would fly to you my love, no matter
how far. As long as theirs strength in
my wings to take me to where you are.
 

Author's Note

I thought I would add a little more to it I Guess a part two of the first one so to speak it starts out the same then has anther stanza or two to it tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

That is a very sweet and romantic poem that is full of deep yearnings and the willing to sacrifice to be with your beloved. A very well written piece and it makes you fly on the wings of love...
"wings aren’t tired yet by far.
As long as they will carry me
to where you are."

[kelvin]

Thank you for your thoughts as always positive and insightful and speak the truth be blessed fellow writer

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome... :)

[SparrowSong]

This defies words, it is to be felt. I really don't have much to say other than this is gorgeous! Who could read this and not have a heart felt sigh by the end...stunning writing.

[kelvin]

Thank you so much for your thoughts here i agree with you its a very nice read i think it's better maybe then the first having more little detail thanks again

[SparrowSong]

You are welcome. Have a wonderful Christmas..:)

[kelvin]

You to bless you and all you love

[Marie]

Did you already write "Wing I"?

[Akira Kodama]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hardknox/1084819/

There.

[kelvin]

huh