Pencil Loves Paper Not

I give a circumcision to the
head of my pencil.

While it introduces itself to
the paper, and then they have
full intercourse.

Flowing gently across the paper's
pale body and beautiful blue lines,
no curves at all just simply straight
blue lines.

Oh could this be love?
Most certainly not love.

For the paper states to pencil,
this is the end of our show.

For we must part our separate
ways with no emotion, leaving
the pencil's lead oh so broken.

Oh poor pencil there's more
pages you will kiss before
your end, listen to this notion.
Fix yourself, for right now,
your lead is simply broken.

Author's Note

Just a simple little way of creative thinking. Tell me what you think enjoy

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love how you maneuvered all the sexual innuendos and connotations into this write, very clever! I guess writing is a lot like making love, there's much coddling and attention to be had, then the final payoff is always sweet when you get it right! Nice...very nice. ;-)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you intake on this read here I do appreciate it to and i agree with you they have similarities

[A Black Rose]

I like this piece because writing is like making love. it involves a partnership between the pen and the paper. Full of emotion, action, packed with feelings. Perfect title, perfect analogy..continue to write my fellow writer:)

[kelvin]

Well thank you for you kind review here and I agree with you totally

[DIVYA]

Kevin! So glad to have found you! This poem is just beyond anything I could have imagined. Adding to favourites at once!

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much for you oh so kind words here and I'm very glad you like this. I really appreciated it I'm glad you found me to hahaha

[Baby Ricochet]

Tell me about it. I write everything on my phone

[kelvin]

haha I hear ya

[LA Lorena]

This was very clever. my pencil and paper break up all the time. still, they always seem to reconcilliate and try again and again. nice write!

[kelvin]

Well thank you very much for your intake on this read here.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is quite clever--

my pencil has had a lot of break-ups with the paper over the years.
but always bounced back to be in a new relationship...

it's that prewrite the paper wants...not just diving in with the act of putting the poem on the paper...it's the foreplay...

cool piece.

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for your thoughts on this read here

[KAOlmsted]

I have witnessed this love affair on so many occasions...sometimes it has a happy ending; most times, it ends in heartache...b*****d writer's block. This really was some creative thinking and I thank you for sharing it with us.

-kimmer

[kelvin]

Thank you for your thoughts on this read and i appreciate it

[luviva]

wow, just loved it!!
i once had a picture about the pencil and sharpenner relationship.
but this is way cool, never heard of it and it just makes sense and laughing ma heart out right now!!
well written my friend!

[kelvin]

hahaha Well thank you very much I'm glad you like it my friend and thanks again you got me laughing because you're laughing

[Marie]

This is clever...great anology to erotica...innuendo...

[kelvin]

Thank you very much I was just doing a little creative thinking is all haha thanks again

[Marie]

You seem to be very creative.

[SparrowSong]

Oh Kelvin, this is fantastic, creative thinking indeed...from the first two lines to the last, this has brought a much needed smile, thank you! Nicely done.

[kelvin]

hahah Thank you so kindly I'm glad it could make you smile for one needing a smile and no thank you for taking the time to read.

[SparrowSong]

Still grinning, those first lines really made me laugh, I love it!

[kelvin]

hahaha keep smiling my friend glad you like it