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my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.my eyes cry but i must keep walking. moving forward.

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

Yes, we must, even if we should be slplit into billions of people saying "I must".

Best of luck with doing so, I'm to as well.

Anyone who should say this isn't poetry has the most faint love of words. I sort of did something like this before with repetition, but given the sentence and the extent of the repetition, this is far more befitting. Like a chant that gets you out of bed in the morning and gets your eyes to close at night.

it's all in how you let yourself feel mentally.
I like the repetition, like determination. reads like something straight out of the mind.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

oh wow.. this is fantastic!! such a unique word structure here.. i love how the descending walkings create a path through the block of words..