Expression...

I never knew i could write... But i am learning how to

A few tipsy thoughts

             Of my misty mind

Lash out a flurry of words,

            And pass on the pain.

A furious sea of sorrows,

            That was immured within

The cragged glaring walls

             That fortified my soul

They succumbed to the load

             And were razed for eternity

 

The cry of robbed hearts

              Tears its way to heavens

And so I scribble,

               My woes and worries,

My whims and fancies

                My ecstasy and grief

My heart is airy

               It does not choke anymore

As I begin to learn

                    The art of expression…

Reviews

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. absolutely ... and your expression is very artistic ... i think sometimes about those who can't ... those who are still prisoners in their minds and my heart goes out to them ... you are brave ... and you inspire me to be brave ... it's remarkable how one expression leads to another ... miraculous in a way ... if you think about it ...

[An owl on the moon]

Everything flows so perfectly here.. the form and font mingled with the rich emotions and expressions... Beautiful and deep.

[Alicante lullaby]

Expressing yourself is perhaps one of the most potent ways to do so,it can even change the fate of nations...its a great release im glad you have the power to allure us with words.

[abhas]

this is great.. simply told... and speaks to the soul... yeah... you are right... this is how i started out too... we all have the gasoline... just need a spark... and im sure you have had yours.. :)

[Loner]

Wow !
that was a handful ...... beautifully portrayed what an emotional punch it was
if this is the beginning for u to learn how to write ..... wonder what will happen when u turn out to be as a writer..... written from within i can feel it....

[Liza]

i love it; the contrast, the weighing and the balancing of emotions and logic trying to meet the heart of matters..every writer can relate - you've expressed elegantly with images and feeling.