shadow

A colourless shadow,

Follows me all around...

Nothing is aglow,

No whisper no sound...

No one can envision,

How I am bound...

The ink does not flow,

And memories haunt me so...

I never was a winner,

But i never seemed so lost...

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Short but meaningful.
I like this poem a lot
Well done

[...]

. oh, i wish you weren't so lost ... these words are just so beautiful ... there's so much longing here ... the last two lines ... are especially poignant ...

kitna achha hota
agar achha hota
bura lagta hai
jab kuchh bhi
achha nahin lagta