What Do You Do?

What do you do when the feelings you have

Are for someone you don’t even know.

Do you tell them about it, or do you leave them alone?

Would they think you’re a creep and tell you to go?

 

How do you share your feelings

When the person isn’t even aware.

Should you try to move on,

Or show them that you care?

 

Is this how love starts?

Having feelings grow for someone you’ve yet to meet?

Do you know right away,

Or do you wait till you’ve fallen a few hundred feet?

Reviews

[Phillitup]

At the end of the second line in the first two stanzas I think there should not be periods but instead a question mark. That is because it is a question/those are questions. Whatever floats your boat though I guess.
I feel like it ends abruptly and leaves you going to far and fast. You can't really stop yet. From two different perspectives:
1) Not a good ending.
2) KEEP IT!!! FEELING LIKE YOUR FALLING OFF THE EDGE OF THE POEM SHOWS THAT YOU HAVE FALLEN A FEW HUNDRED FEET.
I believe you see my point. Well, some people won't see the second POV and will tell you to change it. Listen to the second one. I would listen to the second one because it was more thought out. The person thought long enough for the reason. They want you to keep it that way. You are talented. Don't let different people tell you otherwise. Nicely penned my poetic friend!
Best regards,
Dell

[Mir]

Thank you very much for your review Dell! It was well thought out and much appreciated!
I like the ending, and I'm going to keep it. And I hadn't realized that I put a period instead of a question mark! Thank you again for reviewing! :)

[Phillitup]

Good for you! I rather like the suspense at the end.

[de_maruf]

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[Aly]

Love this!
Well I just about love everything you write!

You are so talented!
I just can't express how talented you are without writing the same things over and over again.

[Mir]

Haha thank you! I honestly don't think I'm that good. But that's probably because I get really insecure with my writing. Thank you for reviewing, and I'm really sorry if I was annoying you with all the read requests! *insert sheepish smile hear* lol

[Aly]

I get insecure about my writing too. I think it's a writer thing ;)
Welcome. Hey thank YOU for sending me those reading requests. I wouldn't have realized what a talented amazing writer you are if I hadn't gotten those.

[Mir]

Oh stooop. Haha thank you!

[Aly]

Welcome! :)