Silence

I don't know.

Room filled with noise

     Head starts pounding

One by one

The noise levels dropping

Till there's none

Silence. 

Author's Note

I was sick of writing in straight columns.haha

Reviews

[devon]

I really like this! The effect that the uneven and scattered lines gives off is edgy, and that's really cool. I think that this could become your "signature"!

:)

[Mir]

Signature? lol I think I know what you mean, but I'm not sure...Thank you for reviewing! :)

[devon]

Yeah! Like, what you're known for as a writer. :)

[Mir]

oh seriously? :D ha you think its that good?

[devon]

Yes, definitely! You're amazing!

[Mir]

Thank you! :) I just commented on your poem that you just recentley requested me! )

[devon]

Alrighty! I will go check it out! Thank you! :) And you're so welcome. I meant it!

[Aly]

nice job.
I like how it isn't straight.
It makes it more exciting! good job best friend!

[Mir]

why thank ya best friend! ;) haha