Poetic Justice

I wrote this one in September of 2007.

If you wait for me in paradise
If you find that you love me dear
I'll walk straight past you
When I come
And I hope you cry real tears.

If you wait for me in paradise
Know that I loved you true
While you left me in hell
Upon this earth
Waiting in vain for you.

Reviews

[Sierra,love]

this is a painful poem,
good non the less

you have very deep words
great job!

[J. Marc]

Hmmm! I read your poet and am speechless! Do not know what to write except to encourage you to go over these somehow unpleasant feelings. Yes, that could be a justice! But you should try to make something out of the love that you keep for yourself.