My Luck With Women

...is poor to say the least.

My.

Luck

is the worst.

With women,

 

is this

comeuppance

erratic

or in perpetuum?

 

“Will you kiss me

goodbye?” she said.

Yes (three times).

Tomorrow then?

 

“Yes,”

but … no …

 

I’m competent.

The root has been discerned.

 

My

luck

is the worst

with women.

Author's Note

Nothing special, just me venting. But still, please, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

I have to say great write, and I feel for you , a lot of us women feel the same,ohh the luck of men. I sit here at home all alone, year in year out. So I think it's a case of join the club LOL. I enjoyed reading this.

[David Salinger]

I can relate, pal. I can definitely relate.

Although you probably knew that already�

[Sandra K]

How cute. But you know, even girls have that situation. Some of us do sit and say, "My luck with Men?!"
lol... I do!

Well i just want to let you know that i do like your writing and think your cute too!!

Sandra K!

[Critic of the World]

Try to find a guy that can't relate to this. Although the poem itself was not very well written, the fact that guys *can* relate makes it accessible, and thus acceptable.

[SamuelStokes]

I enjoy the feeling that the over all writing style conveys. I also enjoy the open aired way that you wrote it, allowing any reader to relate to it effortlessly.

[John Coolidge]

I feel ya, man. I feel ya...[nods]...