Prayer

Yet another experiment!

I sit here in the after-winter cold

no warmth in my chest for me to hold.

For I am unable to feel without my heart

the one you stole the day we were torn apart.

As the days and weeks pass me by

I look to the sky and pray.

Please give me just one more hour,

just a pinch of your infinite power,

so that I can see her face but once more

Before i breathe my last and die at your door.

I ask though it is your choice to decide

whether I am to see her or be at your side.

You have nothing to lose or gain

I just want to ease her pain.

To tell her that I am always here,

that she has nothing to fear.

Author's Note

Everyone tries to make a deal in the end.
But who is to say they ever get their chance?

Reviews

[Deck_As_Heck]

i love this

[Ashley]

I love this. praying does help. 100 sexii lol

[Skateprincess]

What a sad piece and yet it seems kind of hopeful at the same time. Good job

[harley]

this is awesome! i love it(:

[Vanessa Rico]

You have captured the emotion of love flawlessly. Love to me is caring for the other person so much that it would hurt you if they were in pain. I really enjoyed this!

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"For I am unable to feel without my heart
the one you stole the day we were torn apart."

I could relate to this stanza so much. This poem had perfect emotion in it, like what DearSweetAgony said. This is great! Keep writing, you are a very talented poet.

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow
Perfect emotion.
the beautiful longing for something that is running away from you.
The pain for loving someone that doesn't love you back.
I have read this poem 4 times already and after this review I'll read it 4 times more.I'm not a big fan of love but this poem is an exception.
I LOVE this poem It's one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read in my entire life.
Flawless Job!