Be A Rebel

Life was never meant to be fair.

So how does it feel to know,

those around you rarely care?

You cannot distinguish friend from foe.

 

So instead you keep quiet.

Speaking in low tones,

not wanting to fuel a riot.

Looking past your broken bones.

 

Stand up for yourself!

You have no need for their crutches.

Stop living a life of stealth!

Move away from your past grudges.

 

A life is what you crave.

A life is what you shall gain.

To your secrecy you were a slave.

Now you can live without pain.

 

So move on now young one!

You need to stop being so cold.

Go and have yourself some fun,

the time has come to be bold!

 

 

 

Reviews

[I've Killed Lions]

I love it! its very inspiring! and it relates so much to me!

[Deck_As_Heck]

:) i love you christoph! keep up the good work!

[TheMizFit]

One word: Inspiring.

[Sukriti Suki]

Very inspirational, nice.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

chris, once again you have captured a feeling of that so many can relate too, me included. such great iamagery and so full of emotion chris. This will go into my library of favorites. god bless you chris, you deserve true happiness.xoxo

[TJ]

Very goof and empowering message. The first stanza doesn't seem to flow right, I thought it was syllables but it's not; I don't know what it is. Aside from that it's a very good piece!
Good work!

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

nice

[Kayla K]

This is really good, I loved it! It's so empowering

[Misty Blue Eyes]

sooo col. i really liked thsi

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is really good :) welld done Chris :D xxxx