broken

he told me

he would always

love me

 

he said it

 all the time

 

he always

made me happy

till the day i cryed

 

i cryed for

months

i promise now

not to give my

heart so quikly

and easly

 

Reviews

[RM Americano]

Couple of misspellings (cried quickly easily). I don't know if you did that on purpose.

Last stanza is a bit confusing too. What did he say?

[Poison Soulz]

love, and the aching heart.. powerful, great job!