moving on

when you left

i died

i still try

to move on

but you saved me

now i have to save myself

id do anything

for you to come back

but you wont

thats ok

but im gonna move on

Reviews

[Thea Fuentebella]

a good poem strongly written :)

[Poison Soulz]

Great motion put into it, good job! =)

[Judy Ponceby]

Sad, but a spark of hope in moving forward :)

[0_o Abbie]

Love it. The emotion is amazing!