Antidotal

Teach me more 

about your darkness 

she said, 

I cannot to settle

in the equilibrium 

of your peace 

let me dwell in the folds

of your envelope 

I bear more shines 

don’t let me fade in hiding 

don’t let me stray

forbidden 

I am antidotal

to your 

heated countenance 

Reviews

[Fishysua]

The structure is beautiful but you seem to have lost some significant meaning in fitting to it