Good, bad, to often ugly A portfolio
A Book by J. Viands
do I write too much? as always no need to read the whole thing 
© 2012 J. Viands
Author's Note
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This next one is about others… whoever they may be (do I write too much?) as always no need to read the whole thing
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A very rich collection! Extensive use of dark shades in most of them...
If the book had, say a few more chapters of lighter shades, it would come out even more beautifully, like a complete package!
Like your previous one, it had a wider range of emotions covered.
My personal fav would be Gracious God and What's my worth.
You chose an interesting end for Testimony of a Shadow, and the flow of the poem itself was very carefree, like the shadow. I like that!
Dropped the shame was also a delightful read!
Thanks for sharing! The book looks great!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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13 Years Ago
Thanks yo it just sort of fell together dark like that I guess that’s the the too often ugly part
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Added on September 30, 2012
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J. ViandsLeesburg, VA
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My writing is refined in to portfolios I write to much to be able to post all my poetry separately don’t feel obligated to read the whole thing just what you would like… or the whole thi.. more..
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