Observation

It’s hard to see anything,

When you’re not looking,

I’m not looking,

So I see nothing.

 

So much for observation,

When you’re not observing,

Rather creating,

What could this be based on?

 

Maybe quickening,

A beckoning,

To see everything,

Hastening,

 

My realization,

That I am observing

What I am seeing.

Are piece’s falling in to position?

 

Still I don’t think I am succeeding.

Not yet am I returning,

To a skill I am recalling.

It seems I am still struggling.    

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Sometimes we think we are seeing, but it can be subjective in some circumstances. And then, there is the blind, leading the blind!

[J. Viands]

Good analyses might start using that when people ask me what it’s about thanks